Haiku – Your Path Forward Poem by Paul Warren

Haiku – Your Path Forward

Rating: 4.7


Blue sky forever on
Stretching to the horizon
Is your path planned?

© Paul Warren Poetry

Tuesday, October 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 13 October 2015

Another nice haiku....I liked it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2015

Stretching horizon speaks about imagery here which gives idea of blue sky forever on the way of mind.'s journey. Nice haiku shared....10

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Mannah Shekh 13 October 2015

Sweet! Thanks.. :)

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 14 October 2015

Verily, planned actions find the path forward.....10

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Liza Sudina 13 October 2015

smt it seems that everything is already planned by God! or known by Him.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 June 2018

a question to be seriously that before it's replied.

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Rajnish Manga 13 July 2017

Though our life may be destined to tale a particular route but with planning and determined action, one can alter the course of things to come. Nice poem. Thanks, Paul.

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Pregnant with positivist and impregnated with introspection is this short but significant submission. Well done Paul!

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Tia Attwood 14 February 2016

excellent little haiku done in a 6'7'4 format. short, sweet and precise. great job. hopefully i am on the right path now in my life. Regards Tia

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B.m. Biswas 27 November 2015

it is beautifully planned haiku...excellent.....

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