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Haiku – Your Path Forward

Rating: 4.7
Blue sky forever on
Stretching to the horizon
Is your path planned?

© Paul Warren Poetry
Tuesday, October 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
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COMMENTS
Akhtar Jawad 08 June 2018
a question to be seriously that before it's replied.
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Rajnish Manga 13 July 2017
Though our life may be destined to tale a particular route but with planning and determined action, one can alter the course of things to come. Nice poem. Thanks, Paul.
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Pregnant with positivist and impregnated with introspection is this short but significant submission. Well done Paul!
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Tia Attwood 14 February 2016
excellent little haiku done in a 6'7'4 format. short, sweet and precise. great job. hopefully i am on the right path now in my life. Regards Tia
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B.m. Biswas 27 November 2015
it is beautifully planned haiku...excellent.....
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Musawir Raakh 13 November 2015
Short but great one, keep it up dear
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Kelly Kurt 14 October 2015
Though I encourage planning, my path is at my feet and not the horizon.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2015
Stretching horizon speaks about imagery here which gives idea of blue sky forever on the way of mind.'s journey. Nice haiku shared....10
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 14 October 2015
Verily, planned actions find the path forward.....10
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Mannah Shekh 13 October 2015
Sweet! Thanks.. :)
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