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Haiku – Your Path Forward - Poem by Paul Warren

Blue sky forever on
Stretching to the horizon
Is your path planned?

© Paul Warren Poetry

Topic(s) of this poem: haiku

Form: Prose Poem


Comments about Haiku – Your Path Forward by Paul Warren

  • Akhtar Jawad (6/8/2018 2:01:00 AM)

    a question to be seriously that before it's replied. (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (7/13/2017 1:34:00 PM)

    Though our life may be destined to tale a particular route but with planning and determined action, one can alter the course of things to come. Nice poem. Thanks, Paul. (Report)Reply

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet Simon (7/27/2016 4:58:00 PM)

    Pregnant with positivist and impregnated with introspection is this short but significant submission. Well done Paul! (Report)Reply

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  • Tia Attwood (2/14/2016 5:44:00 AM)

    excellent little haiku done in a 6'7'4 format. short, sweet and precise.
    great job. hopefully i am on the right path now in my life.

    Regards
    Tia
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  • B.m. Biswas (11/27/2015 10:00:00 AM)

    it is beautifully planned haiku...excellent..... (Report)Reply

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  • (11/13/2015 6:34:00 PM)

    Short but great one, keep it up dear (Report)Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (10/14/2015 12:58:00 AM)

    Though I encourage planning, my path is at my feet and not the horizon. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/14/2015 12:23:00 AM)

    Stretching horizon speaks about imagery here which gives idea of blue sky forever on the way of mind.'s journey. Nice haiku shared....10 (Report)Reply

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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/14/2015 12:20:00 AM)

    Verily, planned actions find the path forward.....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (10/13/2015 11:57:00 PM)

    Sweet! Thanks.. :) (Report)Reply

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  • (10/13/2015 11:53:00 PM)

    Another nice haiku....I liked it. (Report)Reply

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  • Liza Sudina (10/13/2015 11:53:00 PM)

    smt it seems that everything is already planned by God! or known by Him. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 13, 2015



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