Death Of A Soul Poem by Karly Jaye

Death Of A Soul

Rating: 5.0


Caught in between two different me's
Two different personalities
One that wants to succeed
While the other one fell through the crack
Of my faults, ugly, disastrous and all
Trying to please every person around me
In the end I'm the one dead and falling
Faster than any other soul around
And just when I thought I finally hit the ground
Someone comes back around to spite me
Every person I loved grabbed a knife and stabbed me
Death for the cold, tortured, unhappy soul
Is one slow, painful, never-ending road

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 09 January 2017

An insightful poem with beautiful rendition of words. Thanks for sharing.

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Serenity Prayer 27 November 2009

i can totally relate. great job expressing your emotions. keep up the good work! !

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Nicki Faith 27 November 2009

that was a deep poem very nice

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Steven Aragon 27 November 2009

That was sick. very emotionally provoking. I felt every line and it flowed easily. I enjoyed it. Thank you.

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