Deathwish Poem by scarlet murderess

Deathwish

Rating: 5.0


One.. Two…
Now my eyes are shut!
53 storey high,
One wrong move
And I shall die
One step more
And I’ll see death…

Too bad for words,
Soon I’ll be frigid as corpse
Never for a remorse
Never to breathe again
And guilt is haunting me,
So I must draw the line

Losing my grip
I’ll end my story
53rd floor, I’m on my feet
I got no life to keep
Pull me, oh gravity
Let me die on three!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eddie Roa 20 January 2009

This could be thoughts at freefall but the tension in the verse was not developed enough to convey it strongly. Interesting piece.

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Quezon, Philippines
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