Thursday, March 13, 2008

Deceived Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don’t really know you
I don’t really trust you
What frightens me the most
Is the reality of the hurt you can do to the ones you love
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Mia Valenti
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C.R. Clark 13 March 2008

Nice poem, Mia. I like the decision to move on with life after disappointment. Well written. Thanks Best wishes Richard

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In this poem there's something nostalgic and idealized, however its inspiration is sincere and its style impeccable.

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Scott Austin 13 March 2008

Your pain is felt in the words you have expressed in this write, wish you well, take care. Scott

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Mia Valenti

Mia Valenti

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