Paul Josef

Deciduous - Poem by Paul Josef

Tending to your soil,
My hands are loyal.
I tend to your bark,
Which is gnarled and arced.
I love you. You wilt.
I'm left to prune guilt.

Comments about Deciduous by Paul Josef

  • (12/4/2010 4:33:00 AM)

    I like this clever poem and it has a natural rhythm as organic as this tree! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/16/2009 10:00:00 PM)

    The explanation you gave goes well with the content!
    But I hope in the true spirit of Christmas she might just relent!
    Best wishes,
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 15, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 3, 2010

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