Friday, January 21, 2005

Dedicated To: My Husband Josh Comments

Rating: 2.8

I wish there was a word to express how I feel,
But even I love you isn’t good enough.
I wish there was a way to be with you until the end of time,
But eternity isn’t long enough.
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Rebecca Moors
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Poetry Hound 21 January 2005

Hmmmm... How shall I put this without insulting you? It seems that certain emotions, like being in love and being heartbroken, sometimes have the effect of eliminating the ability to write original poems, if in fact such ability existed to begin with. Feeling powerful emotions doesn't automatically translate into good poetry. Maybe, as you say in your piece, your words can't show what's in your mind.

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