Deep In My Mind Poem by No Reason To Care

Deep In My Mind

Rating: 5.0


Deep in my mind you were found
Time after time safe and sound
But when I changed you were hurt
Found,
Face down in the dirt,
Writhing in pain,
Going insane
Yelling and screaming
Quietly dreaming
Huddled around a cold dark part
That I slowly recognized to be my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wojja Fink 26 April 2009

deeper still are the flowers waiting to bloom......keep writing, they will appear...

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Dan Martins 26 April 2009

Awesome work! Keep up 10 / 10

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Killing Hope 09 April 2009

Unique indeed, good job.

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