Mikael Ejdemyr

Rookie - 94 Points (Borås, Sweden)

Deer People - Poem by Mikael Ejdemyr

(for Simon & Ivan)

Prohibited to shoot
we rove invisible
to the world
on the former
castle estate of
others within ourselves


Beneath ample crowns
of phallic beech
trunks dry last
year leaves fabulous
memories hard to
read nightmares mouldering

Topic(s) of this poem: childhood


Comments about Deer People by Mikael Ejdemyr

  • (3/7/2012 6:18:00 PM)


    you have a way with words, i've never read anything like your work. (Report) Reply

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  • Dulakshi Wakista (2/18/2010 12:38:00 PM)


    Well done! Good work.Nice thoughts.Nice flow write. (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann (2/14/2010 12:53:00 AM)


    Beneath ample crowns
    of phallic beech
    .......................bravo!
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 20, 2014


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