Delayed Monsoon, Senryu Poem by indira babbellapati

Delayed Monsoon, Senryu



cracked and bruised
dehydrated the earth
no tears to shed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Swetha Vanakayalapati 23 June 2012

I read these three lines many times to relate what all i can to.........and mind goes on relating to broken trees, broken bottle tops, street children's life, a bleeding heart, a revenging thought, a mighty arm, .........and what all i'm able to..............this is a true crisp of short poems....we ought to start somewhere with a idea and it never ends.......can conceive a thing...emerging a finite thing! !

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Jasbir Chatterjee 22 June 2012

short and sweet...I shall still keep my hopes alive...monsoon always touches Delhi on 29 June...even if it is just 10 drops...

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 22 June 2012

a sad senyu to show the sad situation. Good.

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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