Delving Into The Purpose Of My Life Poem by Rusha Manandhar

Delving Into The Purpose Of My Life

Rating: 3.5


We came empty handed,
We'll leave doing the same,
it's all upon us to make it,
Either a boring or an interesting game.

I'll be finding an antidote,
For my emptiness,
Pouring whole of myself,
Enjoying each and every moment,
Fulfilling my dreams,
Owning my future,
Unfolding my destiny,
Arranging my own happiness,
And exploring the actual purpose of my life.

I will never blame my fate,
I will make a difference,
Probe the secrets of life,
Abide in the realm of the eternal,
And make my life worthy,
Of something more fulfilling,
And even more satisfying.

I keep my resolution,
To make a change,
One in millions or billions,
I will be attending the TRUE meaning of life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 10 June 2023

Re your title: I'd use 'delving into'. // 'delving noun Digging. Figuratively, search; laborious investigation; research.'

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Bri Edwards 10 June 2023

It's not a bad poem, but I give it only 3 stars. To many poems I give no stars. I avoid giving only 2 or 3. Welcome, 'new poet' on PH. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 10 June 2023

And what IS 'the true meaning of life'? You've asked a lot of questions. I've got enough qeustions e.g. 'what flavor of ice cream shall I have NOW? ' I want answers. Peach?

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Bri Edwards 10 June 2023

And make my life worthy, Of something more fulfilling, And even more satisfying. 'Worthy' of what? And HOW might you do THAT, I wonder.

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Bri Edwards 10 June 2023

What does 'Pouring whole of myself, ' this mean to you? RE stanza 2: Will you have time to sleep?

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