Departed.... Poem by RIC BASTASA

Departed....

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ONE day i told my
wife that the dead are
dead and had nothing
to do with the living
anymore,

and then i got sick
feeling cold and trembling
and could not think
that clearly anymore

i wentto the doctor
and i got hospitalised
for three days and
was diagnose with nothing

my wife prayed and
she went to the barrio soothsayer
who said that
i am being visited by the
spirit of the departed

my dead father missed me
a lot
and every afternoon his soul
comes to embrace me
she said

and thus i feel cold and
trembling and she says
that i must offer prayers
for him
visit him in his grave
and light three candles
for him

on that very afternoon
after the visit of the
departed
i got well again.

we are still linked
to the dead
and they still watch
over us
and they still embrace
us
with all their loneliness.

Thursday, August 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 15 August 2019

This is so sad that your dead father missed you a lot. Soul never dies although body dies. Life exists even after death and soul carries on paranormal activities. Visiting departed spirit you can share emotion and deep feelings. This poem is emotive and excellently penned...10

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Julia Luber 15 August 2019

Sense of pragmatic explanation of an illness; accepting difficult experiences like the visitation of the dead is one way of being stronger than death and what directs us there. Intriguing explicational poetry. Thank you-

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