Departing Poem by Quaid-Uz- Zaman

Departing

Rating: 5.0


Why you are in a hurry? tears still not full and heavy, the sunset has not painted the skyline red;
no whisperings i hear of the
approaching dusk,
this night is luminous while
the brilliant sky covers up all the melancholies.

Thursday, November 11, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: red,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. M. Asim Nehal 12 November 2021

Very true, patience is key to solace.5****

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Nabakishore Dash 12 November 2021

A brilliant write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 November 2021

Beautiful poetic expression! Very touching lines embellished with great images. To my Poem List.

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