........Departing Chimes........ Poem by rowan ahmed

........Departing Chimes........

Rating: 5.0


When the bell of departing chimes,
'll I remember my greatest crimes?
When each letter with blood I wrote
Broke my pen and my will fought
When each seed of hope watered with tears
suppressed me in all my childish fears
I run to my dreams but they run from me
Imprisoned in my mind, I'll never be set free
I surrender to my resented chosen captivity
All I know is there's no hope, no escape posibility
Still something inside of me is crying
Though most of me is on the brink of dying
I try to scream but there's no voice
Helpless here without any choice
The poems to which my soul I gave
rebel on me and freedom crave
Suddenly it seems such a waste
How sad and bitter these all taste
And to whom I'm sure it won't concern
I'm left sole in this hell to burn

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angelic(Annie) Female 22 May 2009

Oh! this is penned beautifully and brings out the inner sorrows with amazingly selected words.. rated 10! and all the best Rowan :)

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Saadat Tahir 08 May 2009

The poems to which my soul I gave rebel on me and freedom crave Suddenly it seems such a waste How sad and bitter these all taste brilliant and touching u have it rowan write more often...great cheers

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Joseph Poewhit 08 May 2009

There is always hope and tomorrow is another day. One never knows what a day will bring forth.

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