Wednesday, December 28, 2005

Depression Comments

Rating: 2.7

i get a funny feeling
it comes from deep inside
i get all mad and angry
wanting to go and hide
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Greenwolfe 1962 18 February 2008

This is nicely done overall. I thought you rhymed very well. As a rhythm and rhyme poet, it pleased me to read it. You have some real potential here. Greenwolfe 1962

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