Monday, October 20, 2025

Depression - Senryu Comments

Rating: 5.0

An endless hushed storm
An invisible battle
A cry no one hears
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rob Lamberton 23 October 2025

…A cry no one hears!

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Isadora Quagmire 21 October 2025

What a sad, but skillfully accurate piece. I wish no one would ever get depressed. May we all seek to be lights to those who are lost in sadness and darkness, so that we may bring them back to the gladness of life.

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Sandra Feldman 21 October 2025

Formidable description! Maybe, the best EVER!

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Sandra Feldman 21 October 2025

Formidable description! Maybe the best EVER

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Sandra Feldman 21 October 2025

Aperfect description. Could not be more perfect no1r clea11r

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Sandra Feldman 21 October 2025

A p0erfect description. Could not be more p00erfect nor cl0000000ear

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Sandra Feldman 21 October 2025

Excellently described. Coul not be said nor felt better, that' the gniu of the great Poet, as we cN

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Anjandev Roy 21 October 2025

Excellent piece as always..... thank you...Rose Marie...

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Rob Lamberton 20 October 2025

Correction 2: may we be free…

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Rob Lamberton 20 October 2025

Correction: silent battle

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Rob Lamberton 20 October 2025

My heart aches for the silent battles that holds us down and keeps us from the joy that is meant for us. Our cry is heard and may be free from the storm!

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Timber Koleden 20 October 2025

A sorrowfully accurate summary of depression! Three powerfully laid strokes that cut to the heart! Well written!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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