(! ! ! !) Destiny Poem by Alice Cuenca

(! ! ! !) Destiny

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With fairy dust
of altered belief
I sprinkled some
powdery sugar
on a worn-out bee
trapped on my side
of the screened-window.


whose spirit is entwined
with your destiny?

My flesh quivers...
Drawn towards the edge
of absolute certainty


In the subterranean depth,
the buzzing sound
grows dimmer.
Death! wielding
over life

A transient passage
into a place
where silence
is gone...

Tuesday, September 8, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: destiny,fairy,trapped
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 27 March 2010

in the subterranean depth, the buzzing sound grows dimmer. Death! wielding over life......................wonderful write yet ingenious by imagery and metaphors,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Marieta Maglas 06 November 2009

nice symbolistic poem, deep ideas well embedded, lovely to read

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Ying Escalona 14 September 2009

very nice, and where was its nectar, it must have gone sweeter after the additional sugar :) anyway, the fate we traced...must be destiny.

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