a tormented soul against the darkness
unuttered sound of a roaring beast
feelings translate a colored vision
the sky slithers in rhythm of emotion
the stars rivaled the moonlight's intensity
gilt of light laments to the sky
an image seen through shadowy trees
in depthness, a nightmare with open eyes
the atmosphere below in idyllic serenity
sleeping, unaware of the uncertainty
of anguised rendered in golden reflection
painted the sky in lamentation
side by side, a duplicate nature struggles
unbending commitment to artistry
to a final price, death...
hMMMMMMMMMM AHHHHHH i HAVE NOTHING TO SAY BUT YOU GOT GOOD WRITING STYLE A SUPERP BEGINNING. KEEP UP LITTLE SISTER YOU GOT THE SOUL OF A POET A HEART OF A DREAMER AND A MAGICAL PEN OF A WRITER. WELCOME, MELVIN
this is as profound as the Mariana's trench kandis....great work...
such beautiful words a translation into words what the painting inflicts
This is a very well written and expressive poem, Kandice, and gives a fascinating intrepretation of what is perhaps Van Gogh's finest painting. Being a fan of Vincent myself, I once visited the little town in Holland where his father was pastor of the local church and played billards on the same table he is purported to have played on in a bar in Nunen in Southern Holland. I have admired his paintings for a very long time. Your poem does great justice to 'Starry Night' It is actually the third and final 'Starry Night' he painted. There are two earlier ones, one of which I chose to be the cover of my 2nd book of poetry. Thank you for the pleasure of reading your fine poem and your very accurate observations on his famous painting. Carl.
Simply marvelous and wonderfully expressive. Exquisite and darkly colorful. 10! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Welcome........the poetry is sad and filled with fear...that reaches out to our soul....... Do keep writing........