Thursday, June 18, 2015

Destiny Comments

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What lie beneath those Saturn eyes,
Those holds that knot the thread, our lives,
Awaken’d unto fading pyres,
Will, unstoked, set bleeding sunset spires
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Ashish Choudhury
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Chinedu Dike 27 June 2015

A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned in poetic diction with nice rhyme scheme. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 18 June 2015

A very well written piece, Ashish. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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Ashish Choudhury 18 June 2015

Thank you!

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