Destiny Poem by Ashish Choudhury

Destiny

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What lie beneath those Saturn eyes,
Those holds that knot the thread, our lives,
Awaken’d unto fading pyres,
Will, unstoked, set bleeding sunset spires

Carried whispers brimmed with memoirs past,
Unfaded strokes of fetters vast,
Trudged forth through weighted spectres’ dome,
For fear, our prospects, frozen home

‘Tis in youth, we fear, in fear of youth,
Unbroken bonds, yet bonds of truth,
Our hope, silk woven yarns in dreams,
To chute, straight through divined end streams

Thursday, June 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 27 June 2015

A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned in poetic diction with nice rhyme scheme. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 18 June 2015

A very well written piece, Ashish. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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Ashish Choudhury 18 June 2015

Thank you!

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