Sunday, January 29, 2017

Detention Comments

Rating: 3.5

I am,
your last priority
waiting,
on your everlasting
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Petros Papadopoulos,
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Sofia Kioroglou 30 January 2017

Lovely poem. As powerful as the thing called love!

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Chinedu Dike 29 January 2017

Beautiful train of thought, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and elegantly brought forth with insight. Lovely love poem written with conviction. Thanks for sharing Petros.

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Petros Papadopoulos 30 January 2017

Thank you very much for you comment! I am happy that you liked the poem!

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Robert Merrett 29 January 2017

Thanks for your poem - It felt tense and I'm assuming tention is a typo for tension. Sounds like you have experienced the pain of waiting for another and their love for you

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Petros Papadopoulos 30 January 2017

I feel relief to express my emotional pain though a poem or a drawing. Definitely love can be very intense! (The poem be updated shortly with no typo mistakes) . Thank you very much for you comment!

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Kim Barney 29 January 2017

Interesting, but what does the word 'tention' mean? This appears to be the first poem that you have posted to this website. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Petros Papadopoulos 30 January 2017

Thank you very much. I am going to correct the typo mistake.

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