I am,
your last priority
waiting,
on your everlasting
...
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Beautiful train of thought, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and elegantly brought forth with insight. Lovely love poem written with conviction. Thanks for sharing Petros.
Thank you very much for you comment! I am happy that you liked the poem!
Thanks for your poem - It felt tense and I'm assuming tention is a typo for tension. Sounds like you have experienced the pain of waiting for another and their love for you
I feel relief to express my emotional pain though a poem or a drawing. Definitely love can be very intense! (The poem be updated shortly with no typo mistakes) . Thank you very much for you comment!
Interesting, but what does the word 'tention' mean? This appears to be the first poem that you have posted to this website. Welcome to Poem Hunter!
Thank you very much. I am going to correct the typo mistake.
Lovely poem. As powerful as the thing called love!