Tuesday, May 29, 2018

Detention Center Haiku Comments

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Chen-ou Liu
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Susan Williams 03 June 2018

It doesn't sound like the bird got out of juvie without losing some of his plumage just like our young ones lose more of their innocence than they had to... I thought this Haiku incredibly powerful and the image stops the reader in their tracks 10+++

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