Tuesday, July 6, 2021

Detonating The Bridge Comments

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Detonating the bridge

Talk is of surrender,
Withdrawal, return.
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Nassy Fesharaki
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Luis A. Estable 06 July 2021

This try to explain tragic situations and make a poem out of it, but the problem is that it dies this very badly. It reads with nothing one could called poetic connections or verses. You need to be careful when you try to make poetry out of things like this.

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