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Devotion

I miss you
I miss your eyes, your smiles, your voice
I miss the feeling that you made me feel when you were here

I still remember how we laughed together in our joy
I still remember how I wiped away your tears

I loved you when you smiled at me, I loved you when you cried
Your happiness my lighted bliss, your tears my mournful night

I loved you even when you turned your face away
And though you made me cry
I love you anyway

Poem Submitted: Friday, August 15, 2008
Poem Edited: Saturday, August 16, 2008

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Comments about Devotion by Inbar

  • Yoseph LupuYoseph Lupu (11/29/2011 11:14:00 PM)

    Very nice! Go on writing!

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (8/15/2008 9:11:00 PM)

    lovely verses..nicely penned..i strongly recommend this..is this for your
    love one? ... the more that person will love you...its great...

    Ency Bearis

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