Inbar

Echo

Drowning in your tears,
Choking,
Screaming words you cannot hear

Is it your face,
Or is it just the mask you wear to hide?

Silence.
Echo of the night.

Just one moment-
All was gone.
Washed away with tears of angels.
Words I never knew before
Singing in my blood

In silence.
Echo of the night.

Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 24, 2008

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  • Yaseen Anwer (10/10/2008 7:01:00 AM)

    A poweful stroke by pen
    Very fine construction
    beautiful theme deserve 10+
    keep going.......

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  • Hannah Martin (10/7/2008 4:28:00 PM)

    Nicely put together! :)
    Love how you refered to the spiritual 'mask'.
    Lovely work!

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  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (7/20/2008 5:11:00 AM)

    so powerful I could feel it. very good.
    sathya narayana

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