Haroon Rayyan

Did I Get Meted Out! - Poem by Haroon Rayyan

Am I an asset or a liability to the society?
Or maybe, by my life they feel pity;
Have I been cursed or hated by everyone?
Or maybe, I hate myself and rather not hated by anyone;
Am I a good child to my parents or an imperfect one?
Or maybe, it is a manufacturing defect! ;
Have I been cared by someone or no one?
Or maybe, I like to be alone and a unique one;
Am I a happy person or a wimp?
Or maybe, I couldn't figure it out as I got a hump;
Am I a smiley or only that I put them in a chat log, lol?
Or maybe, I only find happiness in Noels;
Am I a prodigy or an extra burden to the earth?
Or maybe, if a human like me never existed it would be a worth;
Am I living a hapless life or something else?
Or maybe, I am scared to get false;
Am I God's worth creation or a mistaken figure?
Or maybe, my will is to suffer until it get cure;
Am I the only odd one or the odds are better?
Or maybe, I learned to get odd is bitter;
Am I a person who lives life slowly or how else?
Or maybe, the world is faster to live out;
Am I the only person who lives 2G or a slower network?
Or maybe, me and my cell phone can't bear a 4G network;
Am I the only one who only tastes hardship or a harder dip?
Or maybe, hardship is the only ship I can travel without a pip;
Am I the guy who finds this journey as a burden or not?
Or maybe, the weight of the burden slips my nerve from the knot;
Am I travelling in the path of Mauna Loa or not?
Or maybe, it is not enough hot to burn my sins out;
Am I shy to face the future or afraid to go on?
Or maybe, I know my hopeless path ends soon.

Topic(s) of this poem: personality

Form: Rhyme Royal or Rime Royale

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Self assertion

Comments about Did I Get Meted Out! by Haroon Rayyan

  • Haroon Rayyan (10/23/2016 11:53:00 AM)

    Thank you to everyone who supported my poems ....... was a little busy on studies,so sorry....... I got more poems which will posted soon..... once again thank you to all my well wishers :) :) (Report) Reply

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  • Souren Mondal (11/5/2015 3:36:00 AM)

    [...]my will is to suffer until it get cure;
    Am I the only odd one or the odds are better? '
    Or maybe, I learned to get odd is bitter; '...

    Interesting lines and as Kelly and Valsa mentioned the poem is a very inquisitive and introspective one... I liked your references to internet slangs and mobile internet networks... A nice poem Haroon, thanks for sharing..


    P: S: Sometimes we can do fine in a 2G network.. We may not be able to buffee YouTube videos, but still browse most websites just fine ;)
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  • Valsa George (11/4/2015 6:41:00 AM)

    A poem of deep self introspection! This is a test that will help you to know who you are! You answer the questions honestly and find out answers for yourself and modify your life accordingly! At this age, if you can think so deep about your entity and your personality, I am confident that you will grow into a blessing to your parents and dear ones! You can also become God's worthy creation, if you really strive for it! Enjoyed your poem! (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/4/2015 3:52:00 AM)

    A inquisitive poem, Haroon. thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 4, 2015

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