Amanda Miller

Rookie (5/16/90 / Alabama)

Dieties - Poem by Amanda Miller

The hours I've wasted,
Thinking of You,
Have cast a shadow of doubt,
Over everything I do.

I'm trapped in a box,
filled with betrayal.
All hope has vanished.
I am currently in Hell.

I am fading into yesterday.
Remembering my past.
I'm losing my courage.
I just hope I can last.

I've lost my faith,
In deities and in trust.
My bible is dusty.
And my cross is covered in rust.

Comments about Dieties by Amanda Miller

  • (4/24/2008 8:32:00 AM)

    I love this poem. But please remember that you can always confide in Jesus he is the HOPE of my life. And if you fell like you can not trust any one he will be there for you. And so will I. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/7/2008 6:33:00 PM)

    Dark and demented. My kind of poetry (Report) Reply

  • (4/1/2008 7:46:00 AM)

    Fabulous rythym to this piece. Love the last stanza especially. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 1, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, June 9, 2008

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