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Rating: 5.0

I might be
If I am will you hate me
If I’m not will you love me
Do you want me to be different or
Should I be just like every one eels
Just like Every one eels I will not be
Love me or hate me but I am different
That is what makes me who I am

Autumn Jones 05 August 2009

I love how you ask questions that seem to just be on your mind. It makes it relateable because maybe the reader is thinking the same thing and they know what you mean. Good Job and keep writing. I give it a 9

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~ Jon London ~ 14 June 2009

I think it's important that you just remain true to yourself and to the people that matter most to you....if you believe in yourself...and are happy with being you....why should you change...If you don't have to....Great piece to share

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Dear Emoly, Your interest in witing poetry is more than just what comes to mind. There are no two people that are the same. Emotions are feelings that we identify with ourselves. Caring for others will reward with love requited. Hate is the absence of love and empathy. Education is most important if you are to be read with interest and admiration. English is a rather difficult language to master, Some school is better than none at all. Use a spell checker. I have scanned most all of your poems. Polish them literaly and express with more depth and personal growth, Chose a theme and keep writing! ...louie levy

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It's good to be different sometimes...you stand out of the crowd! ! DLG 10++

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