Dil Ka Kasoor❤ Poem by KAVITA SINGH

Dil Ka Kasoor❤

Rating: 5.0

Kuchh fasalen dooria badha gaye
Kuchh tera vi kasoor tha
Kuchh es dil ki vi thi nadani
Kuchh badla-badla toh jarur tha...

Kuchh baatein yun ruswa kr gai
Kuchh khamoshi me vi pyar tha
Kuchh juban se hum kah na paye
Kuchh jhuki hui najron ka vi kasoor tha


Kuchh khawab adhure rah gaye
Kuchh haqikat se vi anjan the
Kuchh raatein bas aankho me gujar gai..
Kuchh subhon me vi tere hone sa junoon tha



Kuchh yaadein es dil se judi hai
Kuchh kaside tere naam se buni hai
Kuchh palkein teri aash me bichhi hai
Kuchh ummid tere aane ki lagi hai...

Monday, August 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 04 September 2017

• Kuchh baatein yun ruswa kr gai Kuchh khamoshi me vi pyar tha Kuchh juban se hum kah na paye Kuchh jhuki hui najron ka vi kasoor tha - - - - - - - - - - -Some words could not be spoken, and the beloved could not see what love hid behind the lowered eye lids.- - Such a lovely rendition of unexpressed love.- - - - 10

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Kavita Singh 05 September 2017

Thank u so much for ur precious word mam,

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 August 2017

Hi Kavita, Wow! Marvelous write. A great poem of love said totally differently. Kuchh khawab adhure rah gaye Kuchh haqikat se vi anjan the Kuchh raatein bas aankho me gujar gai.. Kuchh subhon me vi tere hone sa junoon tha Some dreams were left incomplete; or should I say, un fulfilled! . May be some khwaish also were left unfulfilled. Some facts remained unknown, allowing the nights to pass by, without being acknowledged by the eyes. And the dawn brought back the desire to become yours... beautifully rendered. A100++ for this love song. The tone of the song tells me that the poet is deeply in love...Let us wish her that her love gets fulfilled...

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