Linda Ori

Rookie - 192 Points (08/13/1945 / UTAH)

Dilemma - Poem by Linda Ori

As I sit here in the night
I am now compelled to write
Something brilliant, something bright
But I want to get it right
So I'm sitting here tonight
In my room, the only light
From the screen before my sight
As I try with all my might
To compose a verse that's tight
Shall I write about a sprite?
Or a bold and gallant knight?
Or a rocketship in flight?

Caught my image in the light -
Geeze - my hair is such a fright!
Think I'll just call it a night................
(But first I'll grab a bite) .


Comments about Dilemma by Linda Ori

  • (1/27/2007 4:14:00 PM)

    Good rhyming exercise Linda, and it did turn out to be very shiny, very bright and very light! ! xx (Report)Reply

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  • (10/26/2006 6:58:00 AM)

    Linda, my love, this is bloody brilliant! Fantastic. I love it! All Dr Seusy and A A Milney and Spike Milliganesqie. You are one clever writer. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx (Report)Reply

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  • (10/16/2006 4:53:00 AM)

    nice rhymes here...

    good job, linda..

    asma...
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/16/2006 2:07:00 AM)

    BOOO! HISSS! LISTEN, WE WANT A VERSE
    , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , FROM MIDNIGHT THE NURSE
    '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''IF WE DON'T GET ONE SOON
    ////////////////////////////WE'LL STEAL HER FORK'N SPOON!
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  • (10/16/2006 1:46:00 AM)

    You made a wonderful rhyme, very enjoyable poem :)

    Preets
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 16, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 19, 2010


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