Love's Disciple

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Disapearing Love 3 - Poem by Love's Disciple

Ever since that dream ive never been the same
When i played foot ball i was off my game
but when i searched for her i was more determined
I turned down so many girls
For the hope that i would find her
Every day i felt worse and worse
It felt like a gypsy put down a curse
Finaly i gave up
And then she came
She was in a wheel chair and about to die
All of a sudden i started to cry
As i wept i told her i would never leaver her
She took her last breath and was gone forever
I visit her grave stone every day
I say hey and that i will be with her some day
I know she changed my life for the better
Yet i have only one regret I didnt say i love her


Comments about Disapearing Love 3 by Love's Disciple

  • Lindsay Snider (3/20/2007 9:24:00 PM)

    okay...you've got me crying. there's no more i can say. this is truly a good poem. (Report)Reply

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  • jennifer hall (2/19/2007 1:05:00 PM)

    this really touched my heart.....if this really happened im sorry.....keep up the good writting (Report)Reply

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  • Aryn James (2/12/2007 8:06:00 PM)

    i really hope you didnt have to really go through somthing like this.. did you? did this really happen? if so im sorry. It is a lovely poem. might sound cheesy but it warmed my heart..really. keep writting.

    ~ Aryn
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 18, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 11, 2010


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