Disjointed Scenes, Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Disjointed Scenes,

Rating: 5.0


DRESSED in heavy black, she shapes
herself into a local map, living in
paradise she thinks, is like heaven,
and hell.
DRESSED in heavy blue, she finds a
stalemate, and grabs it with both hands,
and both feet, cemented to the ground.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 October 2005

David, I'm developing a huge fashion sense. DRESSED in beige would she then become a sage? Or DRESSED in yellow would she then attract a 'druid' type of fellow? I think 'DISJOINTED SCENES' is 'fierce' and oh, so chic! ...LOL. L

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Amanda Leah 02 October 2005

Very strong...very good... Amanda

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Allan James Saywell 02 October 2005

david i am developing a huge respect for your poetry that seems to come from the heart Warm regards allan

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Theodora Onken 02 October 2005

Just had to finally say it...I love all of your poetry, and this one about your sister, is down to earth all the way. Theo

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