Dissappointment Poem by Dawn Lambert

Dissappointment

Rating: 4.5


Dissapointment
Comes and goes
Condiment
Just flows
No one cares
They just walk away
It just like rotten pairs
Distastful
Scream for help
Nobody turns
Then a dog yelp
Then they turn
When i talk
Nobody listen
Im just a wall
A petition
Everything an obstical
Absruction, impediment, hindrace
A barrier
A trouble
It's distress
It's frustation
Sometimes iys anxity
Sometimes its shy but insucure
No diligence
No perseruance
No industry
No vigor
No carefulness
No intensity
No attention
No care
Not evedigent or painstacking
It's all
Its dissappointment

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A very stressful time at making a point, to continue the argument but no one knows its you fault. thats the positive side of being invisible.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandy Player 27 December 2012

That's a lot of negatives listed there. It's nice how you made the lines so short; how essentially disappointment comes and goes. Great work. Never stop writing! -M

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Neko Girl 13 February 2012

wow thts sounds like alot of pain that you are going through good poem alot of hurt full feelings sounding like know one will ever come and pick you up just a life to sit alone with no one to ever to hold... just trust me your day will come when it is your time to rise and be you

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