Distance Poem by moon batchelder

Distance

Rating: 4.5


distance
is the space between.
disparity,
the reason.
disillusionment
the cause;
desolate of meaning.
kindness builds
a tiny wall,
wisdom builds
a fortress.
mindless
to a consequence,
the drawbridge slowly
closes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
June Smithster 04 December 2006

eye love this eye dew the short choppy cadence this is best way to write eye have a few a very feew ones like this one thankzx yew

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bemidji, minnesota
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