T.. Veronica

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Divided Loyalties - Poem by T.. Veronica

When placed between two loyalties
And a choice needs to be made
Reason and logic disappear
And simplicity starts to fade.

Once the decision has been made,
A line has now been crossed
I have the sense to recognize
A side that is now lost

The more I try to do the right
The harder I seem to fall
You have no idea the strength it takes
To try and remain standing tall.

At the cost of everything I hold dear
I will continue to walk this path
And though I know it will anger many,
I am ready to face their wrath.


Comments about Divided Loyalties by T.. Veronica

  • (7/11/2006 10:36:00 AM)


    Thank you for commenting on my work Taryn slowly going through yours and I like what I see good rhyming schemes! I have noticed that when I read one poet it tends in a subconcious way to influence my own work, though I wouldnt notice until I look back on it so now I read small peices of many poets and I end up with a contrasting style. I loved the Idea behind the poem as well as your words. Well done. Seamus (Report) Reply

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  • (4/22/2006 11:45:00 AM)


    great poem! amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Brian Dorn (4/22/2006 11:03:00 AM)


    Taryn, excellent poem! Great title and your words sum it up brilliantly!
    Brian
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 22, 2006



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