Divine Concept Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Divine Concept
Poem’s composition is easy
That keeps one always busy
To remain with deep in thoughts
And write down when it is rightly caught
Poetry is divine concept
The mind is peacefully kept
To think of better ideas all the times
To convince the readers with angle sometimes
It is good to propagate and circulate
To as many readers as possible and relate
It is good to have feed back in earnest
It is considered healthy and best
Of late, I find some deterioration
The poems are written with a view to competition
Many good writers go for purchased vote
To keep ranking and position intact
Why go and beg for reading poem?
If they are good people may prefer them
Vote with nice comments and oblige
But some are only blind with name on page
I refuse such mentality
That compromises good quality
You are wasting time in persuasion
Some invite derogatory words with accusation
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Eh James Downs3 hours ago It does have rhyme so I like that, but there is little rhythm. I'm not too interested in the subject of the poem though it is nice to think about. There isn't much descriptive imagery either. So you got 1/4 things that I like in poetry.
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Great Rimjhim Tyagi2 hours ago True said....well done :) Comment 0
good view Joshua Laws2 hours ago It says alot about being broad minded an how we judge to quckly if poetry couldnt be the place of free expression i dont think it would exzist
truth Larry Stallings2 hours ago agree-this is very well said Comment 0
nice poem Steven Matrixdream3 hours ago i agree with your poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Poem’s composition is easy That keeps one always busy