Brandi Young

Rookie (06-01-89 / New Jersey)

Do You? - Poem by Brandi Young

Do you feel the tears that fall from my face?
Do you see the trail they leave?
Everyone of them has purpose
And a very good one at that

Do you also lay awake at night crying?
Do you also feel that you have to much stress right now?
Well i do, and i hate it!
Why can't we be together right now?

Do you want to end your life?
Do you want to disappear without a trace?
Cause I do!
And I want you to come with me!

Do you want to be together forever?
Do you want to be happy?
I do and it's only going to be with you!
I have tried to live without you, but I couldn't do it!

Do you love me enough to live and be happy?
Do you know that I love you with all my heart?
I will never leave or abandon you!
Cause i would be a fool to leave you!

Do you ever wonder what life would be like in our future together?
Do you ever wonder what life would be like without me?
I have and it sounds great!
But i can't live a second without you, or i would fall apart!

Do you know how it feels to be in love?
Do you know how it feels to be ripped apart from the one you love?
I do, because i look into your eyes and deep into your soul!
I do and i can't stand one more second apart from you!

(6-27-05)

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  • (1/25/2006 11:43:00 AM)


    I can concur and sympathize. I to long the one I love but can't have her. I'll be reading more of these. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006



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