Do You Poem by Carrie Salazar

Do You



do you know
waht your looking for
in this life?

do you belive
in god or do
you just not care

do u live ur life
to the fullest potenitlal
or yourself

do u long be
heard to be
something jsut somthing in this life

do you have an
empty place in ur
heart that never fills

do u long to
be acceppted for who
you really are

do you even
thinkg about this
stuff ro do you
try to not thik about
it becuz it does give u an
empthy feeling that jsut never
goes away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarred Unknown 10 August 2007

I think this is a very good poem. it seems to flow and everyone can realate.. if i may give some advise.. you should read over your poems or put the on 'word' first to check your spelling. and try to be more consistant in your poems of if you choose to type You as -u then try to do that through out the poem other wise very good keep it up and don't worry.. i do the same thing :) .. Yours truly Scarred

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success