Do You Remember? Poem by Jni Willingham

Do You Remember?

Rating: 5.0


We have so many memory's together.
And I thought that we would last forever.
But I was horribly wrong,
For you are now gone.
Do you remember the memory's we shared?
Or did you just act like you cared?
Everything happened so fast.
I just don't know why it couldn't last.
Do you remember anything that happened between us?
Or is that to much of a fuss?
Was everything you said to me a lie?
Because all I can do now is cry.
I can no longer feel any pain from you.
So that must mean my love is fading too.
My feelings are almost gone,
Only because I was just your little pawn.
You have found someone new,
And I have too.
But I can't help but think of you two together.
Maybe y'all will be forever?
Don't lie to her like you did to me.
Or I'll ram your head into a tree. (:

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 July 2011

Nice poem written with great skill and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery. Well done. I rate it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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