Joyce Chelmo

Doe 2 - Poem by Joyce Chelmo

Her brown eyes peek
through leaves cautiously.
Sudden movement frightened
her into this forest hiding place.
Instincts tell her to run;
but curiosity keeps her frozen,
blending in with the scene.
Silent as a whisper,
sinew shivering.

Comments about Doe 2 by Joyce Chelmo

  • (5/21/2006 4:35:00 PM)

    This is so gentle, so fragile, beautiful! , really! and I enjoyed the style
    Love Duncan XXX
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  • (5/7/2006 3:26:00 PM)

    Thank you Tai, the doe is my totem so I describe her often. I just posted it today
    so I'm not sure why you think players don't like it.

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  • (5/7/2006 2:47:00 PM)

    Nice description Joyce...hope there is nothing wrong with this poem, because I give you 10 and some players don't like it apparently! HRTai (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 7, 2006

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