Joyce Chelmo


Enfold Me - Poem by Joyce Chelmo

Memories of you enfold me
through the chill of lonely nights.
Every tiny bud has the right
to bloom.

Our love lives in blue notes
under the untouchable pearl Venus.

Our Dreams mingled with tears
in the rain of our passions.
Our pleas with the stars not granted.

(in memory of unrequited love)


Comments about Enfold Me by Joyce Chelmo

  • (5/23/2006 6:45:00 AM)


    Unconditional and l wonderful for the many turns of loves beautiful pages
    Love Duncan
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  • (5/23/2006 12:17:00 AM)


    You made me cry with this.....


    'Our Dreams mingled with tears
    in the rain of our passions.
    Our pleas with the stars not granted. '

    Excellent...

    Anjana
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  • (4/25/2006 12:47:00 PM)


    Aww, I can feel this one; this poem radiates brilliance. (Report) Reply

  • (4/19/2006 1:23:00 PM)


    Thank you so much Gregory (Report) Reply

  • (4/19/2006 1:11:00 PM)


    Some lovely images presented with every word fitting into place. 'Our love lives in blue notes' and Our Dreams mingled with tears / in the rain of our passions.' is remarkable.

    Kindest regards, Greg
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 19, 2006



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