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Doer And Deeds

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Once doer and deeds raised a quarrel
Doer: 'Deeds, you are very bored and hard'
Deeds: 'So you are weak and unable'

Both laughed, took rest to be active
Doer: 'Are you making some light fun of me? '
Deeds: 'No it is as you are passive'

Both again laughed, looked around
Doer: 'You are a thing but I am human being'

Deeds: 'Here are the problems I find'
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Sunday, October 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: corruption
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Robert Rhyme 23 October 2016

Once doer and deeds raised a quarrel Doer: 'Deeds, you are very bored and hard' Deeds: 'So you are weak and unable' Both laughed, took rest to be active Doer: 'Are you making some light fun of me? ' Deeds: 'No it is as you are passive' Both again laughed, looked around Doer: 'You are a thing but I am human being' Deeds: 'Here are the problems I find' Doer became angry, deeds was cool Doer: 'You must know I can do you anyway' Deeds: 'Yes, illegal, crime and awful' total poem is a great one 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 October 2016

With the muse of Corruption seen everywhere in the land. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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