Dog World Poem by Otteri Selvakumar

Otteri Selvakumar

Otteri Selvakumar

13, santhiyappa street, otteri, chennai-600012, tamilnadu, s.india

Dog World

Rating: 5.0


At the park
Evening time...
Rich dog
Eating biscuts...
Poor boy
Waching hungry...

Dog tsted
Biscuts is
Very costely
Poor boy
Hungery is
Very low of cost...
For the dog world...!
This is human world...?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lucianne Fasolo 30 September 2007

What does 'tsted' mean? Tasted, perhaps? : P You know, you *are* following grammar rules in this poem. There's a lot you choose to ignore and leave out, but you're not writing 'without grammar poems'. You're just too stubborn to realize that, lol. I liked the poem's message, though, :)

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Otteri Selvakumar

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13, santhiyappa street, otteri, chennai-600012, tamilnadu, s.india
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