Domestic Poem by marie burton

Domestic

Rating: 5.0


You take I give
You speak I listen
You call I answer
Your bad am good
Your drunk am dry
You lunge I hide
You laugh I cry
You hurt I bleed
You hit I plead
Your fist my face
You stay I leave
You crawl I grieve
Your sorry am not
Your sad am fine
Your loss not mine

Written by M. BURTON

Saturday, February 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: abused
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 27 February 2016

The great use of contrasts in literature. you hve mastered it well. very nice poem. thank you very much. tony

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