Thursday, July 10, 2014

Don'T End Up Next To Me! Comments

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Don't end up next to me!
My hand won't warm yours
Your dinner will chill waiting for my arrival
The bubbles in the bathtub will go stale and stick to the sides
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Flavia Richardson
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 16 July 2014

Fantastic poem Lisa, excellently written. Siya_! !

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Pheko Motaung 10 July 2014

Absolutely a wonderful poem to be cherished in all the succeeded and the failed four corners of love in the universe.Congratulations on thy exquisitely penned poem.

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