Don'T Give Up Poem by Kristen M Brown

Don'T Give Up

Rating: 4.8


Here I am with my arms wide open
My heart on my sleeve
I used to think I knew what I wanted
But not everything is what it seems
Sometimes dreams may seem so far
Sometimes things don't go right
Nothing is what we want it to be
In the middle of the night
When you can hardly sleep
When you've got so much on your mind
Just want to be free
Just believe in yourself
Believe in the truth
Don't be scared to be you
When things don't go your way
When things get tough
Just when you feel you've had about enough
Think of everything you want and more
Then you'll know what you're fighting for

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Magill 14 April 2010

wow, this is sooooooo good. i cant tell if it rhymes or not. (i hate rhyming poems, mostly because a great one, is so hard to write) great flow, its all about flow, you know. wow.

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 19 February 2010

i guess you should name it 'advice from afar'... nicely written. keep it up: -)

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