Friday, March 22, 2019

Don't Go Yet Comments

Rating: 4.3

There's a darkness tempting you,
I stood still, thinking why
You'd be gone so soon.
I collected my things, my cap and mac,
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Francie Lynch
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Leeann Azzopardi 22 March 2019

I wish my mother would read this. She would take comfort with the thoughtful words

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 March 2019

A beautifully crafted nice song, rich in rhyme and rhythm with a tinge of spirituality and relationship. Thanks for sharing.

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Francie Lynch

Francie Lynch

Monaghan, Ireland
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