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Rating: 4.6


Do not listen to a voice of a witch...
Though she sings, is more melodious...
Do not tempt from flowers of her valley,
That, same - only a Mirage for us...
Your footpath through rainbows
Just was born again in a rain...
Do not listen to a voice of a witch...
From a colourless life, will die your dreams...
Her graceful hair is only web for your trap's...

19.01.09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Balch 19 January 2009

A lovely piece Tsira,10 regards Tom

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Lynda Robson 19 January 2009

Another good write from you Tsira, the voice of the witch is one to be ignored, 10 Lynda xx

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Kevin Carney 01 November 2010

A very short poem with so much. I think your imagery is fantasic in this. It a beautiful free flowing poem.10+++

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Sameer Ahmed 31 January 2009

A very compact but meaningful poem with an alarming message.........Mysterious though............10

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Sameer Ahmed 31 January 2009

A very compact but meaningful poem with an alarming message.........Mysterious though............10

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LOVEFOOL Aka 31 January 2009

very strong imagery and quite dark and mysterous Good write I enjoyed it Thanks 10

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Andrew Blakemore 23 January 2009

A deeply mystical and charming piece Tsira, very well written. Love, Andrew

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