Thursday, June 23, 2011

Don'T Tell Anyone; Comments

Rating: 5.0

Baby you turn my world around,
The world thinks you're a creature,
Taking away everything that holds on to a dream,
I'll stop telling myself those things so late at night,
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Alyssa Siebers
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 June 2011

Outstanding poem. Wonderfully conceived. Great imagery nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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Alyssa Siebers

Alyssa Siebers

Neenah Wisconsin
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