Don't You Poem by Joseph Narusiewicz

Don't You

Rating: 3.5


Your vail of regal moonlight
How I adore you
Eyes see her in the garden
Spiritual erotic balance
Ideal beauty
Smooth marble Venus
Poetry as sweet as a robins nest
Stain glass Valentines Day
Shrines and halos

The captive of a witch
Dark as fishnet silk
Eyes with blue make up
Her garter belts of wet fire
She kisses me like a six inch stiletto
Her red toenails like hot blood
Her tongue wiggles like a porno star
She struts like a whip
The saint and the sinner

I want both! Don't you?

Don't You
Monday, March 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kay Staley 22 March 2016

WOW! ! Thrilling! I usually dont look this strange type of poem that seems to have no rhythm, but the language in this poem captivates enough for me to like it. How great the phrases and words are so articulately put together. Definitely a success. It is like stream of consciousness with very provoking language. Good job.

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Joseph Narusiewicz

Joseph Narusiewicz

So St Paul, Minnesota
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