Done Deal Poem by Alfred Ramos

Done Deal

Rating: 2.5


The day is over
But I’m still not over you
Pain pierces my heart through and through
The darkness rushes in
Like a mortal sin
I guess it just will never be
It’s something you can’t see
The day is done
But I still want to be the one
Your shadow overtakes mine
It’s where you draw the line
I guess there’s no guarantee
Love can drown in an angry sea
The night has taken cover
I still want to be your lover
Loneliness caress me one more time
But you won’t spend a single dime
To make it last an eternity
No happy ending for you and me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angelica Ortiz 13 May 2008

many can relate...this is one of my fav. thanks

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Marvin Brato 29 April 2008

Love does not always lead to a happy ending.High marks.

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Alfred Ramos

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